WHAT ABOUT A HOOK?
•A hook is the first sentences in your essay. You can provide a shocking fact or statistic, tell a (very) short story or joke, use a quote, etc.
•It must catch the attention of your reader while introducing your topic. Try a new hook for the following thesis statements:
–Dumbledore’s essay
–The KKU library should create and enforce an explicit rule, so that students will have clarity in their lives, study at ease, and get better grades.
–Living in a dormitory has many benefits for university students. They can make friends, learn social skills, and save money.