K.Pong
Received well.
I already revised some wording
For my recommendation
In term of Goal/Objective:
Please apply SMART goal by setting specific goal, goal able to measurable, Goal able to do it, Goal is reasonable within timeline project
Such as specific goal’s number that able to do with this project improvement within timeline
In term of Benefits:
Please added benefit both tangible & intangible such as Cost, quality, satisfaction, lead time, error rate, capacity, efficiency, process time, etc.
This will able to convince our management to approved easier
Please see attached file for your reference
PS. please make sure that you are align with your Sponsor & P’Ae (Supaporn) agreed too