To give you some small examples! I described her Employment as a “Personal Assistant for a Thai businesswoman” which is a good and honest description and sounds like a respectable career. Your description “I work with my close friend at coffee shop which is also a small restaurant.” is almost a joke. It would be like describing your job as someone who hangs out with friends in an office where they sometimes do legal things! You could have truthfully described the coffee shop job as “ She Manages a Coffee Shop and Restaurant for the Owner”, and I have never heard of anyone sending photos of their workplace before. In fact she has only managed the Coffee shop for a short time. What she has done for the last 6 years is the job of a Secretary, or by the modern term “Personal Assistant” And her Employers are in fact Thai Business women who operate a number of business ventures. Lapin’s actual own private business, that she has recently ventured into, involves the buying and selling of Real Estate for profit, far more impressive and you could include a photo of her land! It was very disappointing to see your poor descriptions and the results are reflected in the outcome.