Even though that 2was a old ghost story, it might've worked if it was a little longer. But, at 3 pages, it was awful. The character of the murderer was so obvious that the whole story could easily be predicted. I'm not saying this to act like I'm so cleaver for "figuring this out" it was just so obvious. There was nothing scary about the story, I think, for the same reason watching the end of a scary movie isn't scary: There's no surprise or buildup. I think this story could've worked, I really do.