Page 1:
Panel 1:
Side view of Lynne close up as she looks down. – A voice: Lynne...-
Panel 2
: Low angel shot - Lynne looks up everything around her, gone. (white blank background) In front of her she sees a figure. A female figure.
Panel 3:
Lynne: Who are you...?
Panel 4:
Woman: I am… -she smiles- your mother
Page 2:
Panel 1:
Lynne cries as she goes on her knees.
Panel 2:
Serina lifts Lynnes face up by chin as they look at eachother.
Panel 3:
A close up shot of Serinas eyes turning white with luca symbol glowing inside. Serinas Luca symbol on her forehead glows
Panel 4-5:
Side shot as wings grow and cover both of them like a cocoon.
Past: (Story of Serina & Barthel)
Serina – Luca Angel – has Luca symbol scared on her forehead
Barthel – Baltier Fang –has Baltier symbol scared on his left arm
Page 3:
Panel 1:
Show Lynne floating in blank space with her eyes closed. Text:Listen… to our story Lynne. Let me show you -
Panel 2:
-Black panel with typography :
20 years ago... Here are our memories.
Panel 3:
Takes place in Baltier forest
Panel 4-5:
Barthel fighting of a huge charmer with fellow Fang member Hak.
-Fight scene- (anything)
Page 4:
Panel 1-2:
Barthel slays the monster with his powers as his owl rests on his shoulder. –he pats it as hak looks at him panting-
Panel 3:
Back view of Hak showing Barthel - Barthel: come on Hak! –he laughs-
Panel 4:
Side shot - Hak: Arghhh! Hey this one was stronger than the others – Barthel: Excuses as always –he smiles-
Panel 5:
close up shot of Hak - Hak: Barthel… Let’s go collect the ransom.
Page 5:
Panel 1:
A shot of a small village near the hills.
Panel 2:
Shot of Hak collecting money from the guy as Barthel plays with his owl in background.
Panel 3-4-5:
Barthel hears a little boy having a conversation with his mum.
Boy: What’s it like in Luca?
Mother: Oh boy, Luca’s are evil it’s not a nice city to visit.
Boy: But look at the lights mummy, it’s beautiful. –he points-
Page 6:
Panel 1-2: -
Barthel looks across the town and see’s the lights of Luca in the distant as the Luca castle floats above-
Panel 3:
Barthel face mesmerised(close up pan) Barthel: -thinking to himself- Hmm city of lights, wonder what it’s like.
Panel 4:
Hak: Come on Barthel let’s go! Bathel: Yeah I’m coming!
Panel 5:
–a shot of them exiting the village-
Page 7:
(Back in the woods)
Panel 1:
Side shot of Barthel stopped walking as Hak in front of him In a distant still walking- Barthel: Hey Hak, have you ever wondered what Luca is like?
Panel 2:
Close up shot - Hack: Are you stupid!? As a fellow Fang you know not to mention Luca!
Panel 3:
Shot of Barthel - Barthel: Hmm, but what if it’s not as bad as the general says… or the people.
Panel 4-5:
Hack: They’ve cursed us with evil charmers, people in the villages suffer, what’s not bad about that.
Barthel: People in the village suffer… Not the people in the city of Baltier… protected by warriors.
Page 8:
Panel 1-2:
(any angle or shot) Barthel: If Baltier stuck together as one city none of this would have happened! If there was no such thing as the Great War against Luca none of this would have happened! I’m sick of being brainwashed by upper class Warriors and being told something without knowing!
Panel 3:
Hak: Luca is the same! They are not one city! People suffer!
Panel 4-5:
Barthel: I want to see for myself – he looks up at the sky- I want to see the lights up close… The high castle… the people…
Page 9:
Panel1:
Barthel: Hack, I need your help –he smiles as he pats his owl-
Panel 2-3:
-Hak looks at Barthel (normal face)- -Then he becomes surprised-
Panel 4-5:
(any panel shot) Hack: IDIOT! No No No! –turns around and walks away from Barthel-
Page 10:
Panel 1:
Shoulder close up shot from hack with Barthel at the background - Barthel: Hak… Please…. I can’t do this without you…
Panel 2:
Side shot of Barthel on left side and -Hak stopping looks down and speaks- Hak: If you get caught, you know what will happen... right?
Panel 3:
-close up of Hack side view looking down fist clenched- Hak: Then why...? You’re the closes to family I have…
Panel 4:
Hak: What will I do if something happen to you!? –Turns around and looks at Barthel-
Panel 5:
-Barthel smiles with his teeth (cheeky smile)-
Page 11:
Panel 1-2:
Hak: Argh the things I do for you... –walks towards Barthel- Don’t get caught! Hide your symbol well! Hide Kil (the owl)!
Panel 3-4:
Barthel: -laughs- I’ll be fine Hak. - Hak: -sigh- How do you plan to get there?
Panel 5:
Barthel: How else? –Smirks-
Page 12:
(Put this in panels how you see)
-Kil(the owl) flies and places himself on barthels back digs his claws in. Barthel starts to grow fangs his eyes turn pitch black with the barthel symbol inside, Kil turns into his wings (transforms into a fang) He looks at Hack, smiles and then flies of.
Page 13:
Panel 1-2:
Hak looks up. Hak shouts: IDIOT!! IDIOT!!!! VISIT EVERYDAY! TELL ME EVERYTHING! DON’T GET CAUGHT!! IDIOT! –
Panel 3:
zoom at hacks face and he then has a light smile & whispers- Goodluck.... friend.