Regarding to the suggested content you attached earlier, just want to check whether had reviewed and agreed on both content and copy writing yet ka? What we felt is like the main idea of each topic is there, but the way of crafting the story and tied is up together is quite odd.
Anyway, just our thought here on this. Maybe this time I will need input from the team (Publiscis and Saatchi) na ka.. We are open for idea and suggestion ka. Please feel free to share your thought ka.