Hello MoonMachine,
Sorry about the long delay. I wasn't available this past week. Here are the comments on Creeper5.jpg from the main guy in our company.
Dave
Hi, I still think her head has to look up at a more extreme angle, lips parted. She looks like a Valley Girl saying OMG!. It's OK, but needs some tension and a realistic feel. She doesn't look terrified , which is how she should look. She needs a look of tension in her body.
GTO