find the mistakes.there are 10 mistakes in grammar,punctuation,and capitalization.find and correct them.
..A man from texas died efter he had been stung forty times as he was trying to remove a nest.since january1 2000,there has been two serious attacks in las vegas.bees stung a 79-year-old man thirty times,but he lived.in march bees covered a 77-year-old-woman who is walking down the street.the bees were attracted to something she was carrying in her bag.firefighters covered the woman with water to remove more than 200 bees from her.bees stung the woman more than 500 times,but she lived two.
....writing practice
choose one of the topics below
...an animal or insect i dislike
....an animal or insect that is a problem
...a disease that is a problem
..........pre-writing
work with a group,a partner,or alone
write your topic at the top of your paper
then think of as many reasons about the topic as you can.write every word or phrase that comes into your mind abouy the topic.write down as much inportant as you can
write your ideas in any order you like.do not worry about whether or not the idea is important.write it down
.......develop an outline
.....organize your ideas.
write the main idea sentence
.pick the best reasons from the ones you wrote.
..order your reasons.do not forget to put your most important reason last
remember to use these transitions for giving reasons
..the final reason is
.....make a more detailed outline.the paragraph outline on the next page will help you
.......did you give your paragraph a title
....did you indent the first line
......did you write on every other line
does your paragraph have a topic sentence
.....does your topic sentence have a controlling idea
...do your other sentences support your topic sentence
...are your ideas in the correct order
....does your paragraph have a concluding sentence
.....how many different species of insects are living on earth
.....how many times its body length can a flea jump
....most animals have changed over thw last million years.but cockroaches have not changed in any way for a long time.how long
.....some worms have more than one heart.how many hearts can some worms have.
....how many stomachs does a honey bee have
...how many times its body weight can an ant lift
...can a fly see in more directions at one time than a human bein...
.....what kind of food do flies eat
.any food
.liquid food
. ...how do insects breathe
.through their mouths
.through their bellies
.......do fleas have wing
find the mistakes.there are 10 mistakes in grammar,punctuation,and capitalization.find and correct them...A man from texas died efter he had been stung forty times as he was trying to remove a nest.since january1 2000,there has been two serious attacks in las vegas.bees stung a 79-year-old man thirty times,but he lived.in march bees covered a 77-year-old-woman who is walking down the street.the bees were attracted to something she was carrying in her bag.firefighters covered the woman with water to remove more than 200 bees from her.bees stung the woman more than 500 times,but she lived two.....writing practicechoose one of the topics below...an animal or insect i dislike....an animal or insect that is a problem...a disease that is a problem..........pre-writingwork with a group,a partner,or alonewrite your topic at the top of your paperthen think of as many reasons about the topic as you can.write every word or phrase that comes into your mind abouy the topic.write down as much inportant as you canwrite your ideas in any order you like.do not worry about whether or not the idea is important.write it down.......develop an outline.....organize your ideas.write the main idea sentence.pick the best reasons from the ones you wrote...order your reasons.do not forget to put your most important reason lastremember to use these transitions for giving reasons..the final reason is.....make a more detailed outline.the paragraph outline on the next page will help you.......did you give your paragraph a title....did you indent the first line......did you write on every other linedoes your paragraph have a topic sentence.....does your topic sentence have a controlling idea...do your other sentences support your topic sentence...are your ideas in the correct order ....does your paragraph have a concluding sentence.....how many different species of insects are living on earth.....how many times its body length can a flea jump....most animals have changed over thw last million years.but cockroaches have not changed in any way for a long time.how long.....some worms have more than one heart.how many hearts can some worms have.....how many stomachs does a honey bee have...how many times its body weight can an ant lift...can a fly see in more directions at one time than a human bein........what kind of food do flies eat.any food.liquid food. ...how do insects breathe.through their mouths.through their bellies.......do fleas have wing
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