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Hinata Takes Charge by jd-2by4
Anime » Naruto Rated: T, English, Humor & Romance, Naruto U., Hinata H., Words: 13k+, Favs: 60, Follows: 39, Published: Sep 4, 2007 Updated: Oct 7, 2007 73Chapter 1
Disclaimer:I do not own Naruto
A/N: What you are about to read is the product of boredom and an idea that came to me when I read chapter 1 of J. Christopher Claybrooks' "The Truth!". Although this story was inspired by Ch1 of "The Truth!" there is no relation whatsoever. Its so different you might not even think it was inspired by it.
Enjoy :)
"WOW! That was awesome Sakura." said Naruto as he watched all the broken Trees.
Sakura just smiled at the compliment and didn't say anything. However, in her head, "Cha! I'm
"If you think that was good, wait until you see what Tsunade-sama, is going to teach me today"
"I wish ero-sennin would teach me something cool like that. He just peeks in women's bathhouses"
Behind one of the trees of the training area was Hyuuga Hinata, eavesdropping on their conversation. She was just watching Naruto train behind the tree, when Sakura came to showoff. This didn't surprise her though, Sakura had been showing off in front of her crush ever since he got back from his three year training with one of the sannin. It always ended with Naruto asking Sakura out and punch in his face. However this time…
"Hey Sakura want to get some ramen with me?" Naruto said smiling
"Sure, why not. I still havn't thanked you for keeping your promise on bringing back Sasuke"
Naruto had recently succeeded in knocking some sense into Sasuke and brought him back. Everyone was happy and threw a welcome back party (even though the one that returned was a power hungry maniac that deserted his own village for more power)
'sure why not' 'sure why not' 'sure why not' this repeated over and over in Hinata's mind. Sakura had finally said yes to one of Naruto's invitations.
'This is bad, Sakura finally said yes, soon it will be dates, and soon a wedding ring' she thought. She fell to her knees and tried to hold back her tears. She was making a big deal out of a simple yes to a lunch invitation. She always hoped that Sakura would pay no attention to Naruto once Sasuke was back
When Naruto and Sakura left, Hyuuga Hinata got back to her feet and started walking back to the village. Deep in thought of what just happened., she did not pay attention to where she was going. She hit a signpost.
'What's this….I never seen this before'
The sign read:
"Old abandoned warehouse ahead,
there is absolutely nothing important in this warehouse
especially not a Scroll of Sealing, full of jutsu sealed by the first hokage.
If it was here, don't you think their should be a bunch of ninja guarding it? move along
-third hokage
She thought it was odd since the sign obviously gave away that the Scroll of Sealing was in the warehouse, but then again if the scroll was easily stolen by someone who didn't even pass the ninja academy, why not move it somewhere everyone least expects. She turned the other way and headed back to the village when an idea hit her. What if she learned a jutsu from that scroll…
She started daydreaming:
"Wow Hinata that was super awesome! Better than anything Sakura had showed me!" said a certain blond boy
"Oh its nothing Naruto, really" Hinata said,
"Want to go with me to get some ramen?"
"Sure" smiling, she hugged Naruto and they both walked into the village holding hands
At that though, she spun around and walked towards the abandoned warehouse in the middle of the forest.
Inside the warehouse:
'hmm there are some weird jutsus here, wonder which one would impress Naruto the most'
She then saw a certain jutsu in the scroll, a jutsu that can allow the user to modify and change the target's mind. She pondered the idea of changing Naruto's mind so that he would like her…
'no no no, that is wrong, I should earn his love not take it from him' this reason however, was immediately dismissed when a certain phrase was repeated in her head
'sure why not'
It was getting dark, so she decided to pull out an empty scroll and write down exactly how the mind control jutsu is done, and walked home.
The next day:
Hinata was walking towards the training area where Naruto always trained, when she arrived Naruto was their resting under a tree. He immediately noticed the girl walking towards him, he got up and smiling he said.
"Hey Hinata! What are you doing here."
"Umm…..I was….Naruto…" She could barely speak, knowing what she is about to do to the love of her life
"ok….well, do you need anything?"
"Umm…."
"Well…if nothing, then I guess I shall take my leave"
Naruto got up and started walking away when Hinata was finally able to speak.
"I wanted to get your opinion on a new jutsu I just learned!" blurted out Hinata, this caught Naruto's ears.
"A new jutsu! Wow, what does it do? Is it some super secret technique only learned by your clan?! Show me!"
Hinata was blushing, and her hands were shaking, knowing what the jutsu would do to him…
'I shouldn't do this…what if he notices the hand-seals…what if doesn't work and he finds out what I was going to do to him…"
Once again her mind was trying to talk her out of it, but then memories of her life flashed before her: her own father calling her weak, her sister gloating about their father liking her more, and Naruto cheering her during the chunin exams, and a certain phrase she heard yesterday 'sure why not' An evil grin appeared on her face and their was only one thing in her mind 'life at the least owes me his love'
She breezed through the hand-seals and looked at Naruto, and closed her eyes hoping he doesn't notice what she is about to do.
After a while Hinata finally got the courage to open her eyes, only to stare at a Naruto with a blank expression in his face, looking as if he was deep in thought.
'oh what have I done…this was a bad idea' She hoped that Naruto would say something or move, to give some sign his mind was intact. She was about to release the jutsu when she realized she had gone too far to stop now.
"Naruto….listen to me…you…." She said in a soft voice that no one could hear. She couldn't bring herself to modify her love's mind. 'alright just one day…just day and I will make him love Sakura again…just one dayto spend with the love of her With that, she stopped her stuttering.
"Naruto, you only like Sakura as a friend"
"…"
"The love of your life is….me, Hinata Hyuuga" blushing when she said that.
"…"
She looked into Naruto's blank expressin, and did a hand-seal to finish off the jutsu. She then ran to Naruto and hugged him, and started to cry. 'I hope you can understand why I did this forgive me she thought.
Naruto then snapped back into reality and smiled, the love of his life was their hugging him. His smile quickly vanished when he noticed she was crying. He then hugged her back.
"Whats wrong Hina-chan? Please don't cry"
Noticing that Naruto was hugging her, she blushed and stepped back, breaking the hug.
"…..what did you just call me?!"
"Hina-chan….I just thought of it" Naruto smiled
"…it…it worked…." she smiled '
his paying attention to me….,he loves me, HE LOVES ME'she thought happily, forgetting what she just did to his mind.
"What worked?"
"oh….nothing,"
"So…want to go get some ramen Hina-chan?"
"sure…" she smiled happily. The guilt of modifying her crush's mind has completely left.
At Konoha:
Sakura was looking for Naruto everywhere, when she finally saw him walking towards Ichiraku Ramen. Smiling, she ran towards him.
"Hey Naruto" she said failing to see the girl hugging Naruto's left arm.
"Hi Sakura, so how was Tsunade-baa-chan's training yesterday"
"It was great, she left me alone in the Hokage's library, and I took a peek into one of the scrolls their, and learned a very, very powerful jutsu. Want to see?"
"Sorry Sakura, me and Hina-chan are spending the day together"
'what….hina-chan?' she thought, she then noticed the girl clinging to Naruto's arm.
"…what….what did you just call her?…and since when did you two…"
Hinata hugged Naruto's arm a little tighter, Naruto noticed this and looked at her, then back at Sakura.
"Sorry Sakura, but you know, places to go, so little time" Naruto smiled and he and Hinata started walking to the Ichiraku.
"What the heck was that all about…"
Shikamaru was lying on the grass, looking at the clouds. He was lying at that spot since sunrise. He decided to finally get up to get something to eat when he saw Naruto and Hinata together. He was about to yell at Naruto to ask him whats going on, when he saw Sakura not far behind the two. To top it off, Ino was headed towards him.
"troublesome" he sighed and lied down again.
"Hey Shikamaru, are you going to look at clouds all day?!" Ino yelled
"Hey, I tried to get up once, and you know what I saw? I saw Naruto with Hinata walking towards Ichiraku…"
Shikamaru just realized his mistake, telling Naruto and Hinata were together to Ino was like using the "pull leaver incase Hinata and Naruto are together." Knowing Ino, it will only be a few more minutes before everyone in Konoha will know, even Hiashi…In an instant Ino was gone. Leaving Shikamaru alone again.
"oops…sorry Naruto, I should probably stop her….nah" Shikamaru then went back to watching clouds.
On top of the Hokage monument:
Naruto and Hinata were together watching the beautiful sunset.
"Today was a wonderful day Hina-chan, we should do this more often"
'yes…today…' Hinata remembered her promise to herself, she was only going to keep Naruto like this for one day, and change his mind back. She sighed knowing that today would never happen again.
"Naruto…can I ask you a question?"
"Sure Hina-chan, whats in your mind?"
"Umm…If what your feeling for me now was just caused by some jutsu I used on you….how would you feel?"
Naruto laughed at what she said and smiled, "we
FanFictionเพียงในชุมชนฟอรั่มเพิ่มเติมHinata ใช้ค่า โดย jd 2by4 การ์ตูน» นารูโตะอันดับ: T ภาษาอังกฤษ เรื่องตลก และโรแมนติก นารูโตะประเทศ Hinata H. คำ: 13 k + รายการโปรด: 60 ดังนี้: 39 เผยแพร่: Sep 4, 2007 ปรับปรุง: 7 Oct, 2007 73Chapter 1การปฏิเสธ: ฉันได้เป็นเจ้าของนารูโตะA / n:สิ่งที่คุณกำลังจะอ่านเป็นผลิตภัณฑ์ของความเบื่อและความคิดที่มากับฉันเมื่อฉันอ่านบทที่ 1 ของ J. คริสโตเฟอร์ Claybrooks "จริง" แม้ว่าเรื่องนี้ได้แรงบันดาลใจ Ch1 "จริง" มีความสัมพันธ์ไม่มีเลย ความแตกต่างกันดังนั้นคุณอาจไม่ได้คิดได้แรงบันดาลใจมันได้เพลิดเพลินกับ:)"ว้าว ที่นั้นน่ากลัวซากุระ"กล่าวว่า นารูโตะเขาเฝ้าดูต้นไม้ที่หักทั้งหมดซากุระเพียงยิ้มที่สั่งการ และไม่ได้พูดอะไร อย่างไรก็ตาม ในหัวของเธอ "ชา ผม "ถ้าคุณคิดว่า ความสะอาด รอจนกว่าคุณเห็น sama Tsunade อะไร จะไปสอนให้ฉันวันนี้""ฉันต้องการ ero sennin จะสอนฉันสิ่งที่เย็นเช่นนั้น เขาเพียง peeks ใน bathhouses ของผู้หญิง"หลังหนึ่งของพื้นที่การฝึกอบรมถูก Hyuuga Hinata แอบสนทนาของพวกเขา เธอได้ดูนารูโตะรถไฟหลังต้นไม้ เพียงเมื่อซากุระมา showoff นี้ไม่ได้แปลกใจเธอว่า ซากุระได้ถูกแสดงออกหน้าความสนใจของเธอตั้งแต่ที่เขาได้กลับจากฝึกอบรมเขาสามปีกับ sannin จะสิ้นสุดกับนารูโตะให้ซากุระออก และชกหน้าเขา อย่างไรก็ตามนี้เวลา..."เดี๋ยวก่อน ซากุระต้องไปบางราเม็งกับฉัน? " นารูโตะกล่าวว่า ยิ้ม"แน่นอน ทำไมไม่ ฉันยัง havn't ขอบคุณคุณสำหรับรักษาสัญญาของคุณนำคุณกลับไป "นารูโตะมีเพิ่งประสบความสำเร็จในการเคาะความรู้สึกบางอย่างเป็นศัตรู และนำเขากลับไป ทุกคนมีความสุข และโยนหลังฝ่ายต้อนรับ (แม้ส่งคืนถูกเป็นบ้ามอเตอร์ไซค์ที่หิวการไฟฟ้าที่ร้างหมู่บ้านของเขาเองสำหรับพลังงานมากขึ้น)'แน่ทำไมไม่' 'แน่ทำไมไม่' 'แน่ทำไมไม่' นี้ซ้ำซาก ๆ ของ Hinata จำ ซากุระได้สุดท้ายกล่าวว่า ใช่คำเชิญของนารูโตะอย่างใดอย่างหนึ่ง'นี้ไม่ดี ซากุระว่า ใช่สุดท้าย เร็ว ๆ นี้ จะมีวันที่ และเร็ว ๆ นี้แหวนแต่งงาน' เธอคิด เธอให้หัวเข่าของเธอ และพยายามที่จะกลั้นน้ำตาของเธอ เธอได้ทำเรื่องใหญ่ไม่ใช่เรื่องการเชิญกลาง เธอเสมอหวังว่า ซากุระจะเฉยนารูโตะเมื่อคุณได้กลับเมื่อนารูโตะและซากุระ Hyuuga Hinata ได้กลับไปที่เท้าของเธอ และเริ่มต้นเดินกลับไปยังหมู่บ้าน ลึกในความคิดที่เกิดขึ้น เธอก็ไม่สนใจที่เธอกำลัง เธอตีป้ายบอกทาง' นี่คืออะไร...ฉันไม่เคยเห็นนี้ก่อน 'เครื่องหมายที่อ่าน:"เก่าที่ถูกทอดทิ้งคลังสินค้าล่วงหน้ามีสิ่งใดสำคัญในคลังสินค้านี้โดยเฉพาะอย่างยิ่งไม่เป็นเลื่อนของยาแนวรอยต่อ เต็ม jutsu ที่ปิดสนิท โดย hokage แรกถ้า มันเป็นนี่ ไม่คุณคิดว่า พวกเขาควรพวงของการรักษามันนินจา ย้ายไปตาม-สาม hokageเธอคิดว่า มันแปลก ตั้งแต่หมายแน่นอนให้ไปที่การเลื่อนของบรรจุอยู่ในคลังสินค้า แต่แล้ว again ถ้าเลื่อนได้ถูกขโมย โดยบุคคลที่ไม่ได้ผ่านสถาบันนินจา ทำไมไม่ย้ายบางคนคาดว่าอย่างน้อย เธอหันไปทางอื่น และมุ่งหน้ากลับไปยังหมู่บ้านเมื่อตีความคิดเธอ ถ้าเธอรู้ jutsu จากนั้นเลื่อน...เธอเริ่ม daydreaming:"ว้าว Hinata ที่น่ากลัวที่สุด ดีกว่าสิ่งที่ ซากุระได้พบฉัน "กล่าวว่า เด็กสีที่แน่นอน"โอ้ ไม่มีอะไรของนารูโตะ จริง ๆ " Hinata กล่าว"ต้องไปกับฉันได้ราเม็งบางหรือไม่""แน่ใจ" ยิ้ม เธอ hugged นารูโตะ และพวกเขาทั้งสองเดินเข้าไปในหมู่บ้านมือถือว่า แม้ว่า เธอปั่นรอบ แล้วเดินเข้าไปหาคลังละทิ้งในกลางป่าภายในคลังสินค้า:'อืมมมีบาง jutsus แปลกที่นี่ สงสัยซึ่งจะสร้างความประทับใจนารูโตะที่สุด'จากนั้นเธอเห็น jutsu ในเลื่อน jutsu ที่อนุญาตให้ผู้ใช้ปรับเปลี่ยน และเปลี่ยนแปลงจิตใจของเป้าหมาย ความคิดของการเปลี่ยนแปลงจิตใจของนารูโตะที่เขาต้องการให้เธอ pondered เธอ...' ไม่มีไม่มี ที่เป็น ควรหาเขารักไม่ใช้มันจากเขา ' ด้วยเหตุนี้อย่างไรก็ตาม ถูกทันทีไล่เมื่อบางวลีที่ซ้ำในหัวของเธอ'แน่ทำไมไม่'มันคือการเข้ม ดังนั้นเธอจึงตัดสินใจดึงเลื่อนว่างเปล่า และจดบันทึกว่าวิธี jutsu ควบคุมจิตใจจะทำ และเดินเข้าบ้านในวันถัดไป:Hinata was walking towards the training area where Naruto always trained, when she arrived Naruto was their resting under a tree. He immediately noticed the girl walking towards him, he got up and smiling he said."Hey Hinata! What are you doing here.""Umm…..I was….Naruto…" She could barely speak, knowing what she is about to do to the love of her life"ok….well, do you need anything?""Umm….""Well…if nothing, then I guess I shall take my leave"Naruto got up and started walking away when Hinata was finally able to speak."I wanted to get your opinion on a new jutsu I just learned!" blurted out Hinata, this caught Naruto's ears."A new jutsu! Wow, what does it do? Is it some super secret technique only learned by your clan?! Show me!"Hinata was blushing, and her hands were shaking, knowing what the jutsu would do to him…'I shouldn't do this…what if he notices the hand-seals…what if doesn't work and he finds out what I was going to do to him…"Once again her mind was trying to talk her out of it, but then memories of her life flashed before her: her own father calling her weak, her sister gloating about their father liking her more, and Naruto cheering her during the chunin exams, and a certain phrase she heard yesterday 'sure why not' An evil grin appeared on her face and their was only one thing in her mind 'life at the least owes me his love'She breezed through the hand-seals and looked at Naruto, and closed her eyes hoping he doesn't notice what she is about to do.After a while Hinata finally got the courage to open her eyes, only to stare at a Naruto with a blank expression in his face, looking as if he was deep in thought.'oh what have I done…this was a bad idea' She hoped that Naruto would say something or move, to give some sign his mind was intact. She was about to release the jutsu when she realized she had gone too far to stop now."Naruto….listen to me…you…." She said in a soft voice that no one could hear. She couldn't bring herself to modify her love's mind. 'alright just one day…just day and I will make him love Sakura again…just one dayto spend with the love of her With that, she stopped her stuttering."Naruto, you only like Sakura as a friend""…""The love of your life is….me, Hinata Hyuuga" blushing when she said that."…"She looked into Naruto's blank expressin, and did a hand-seal to finish off the jutsu. She then ran to Naruto and hugged him, and started to cry. 'I hope you can understand why I did this forgive me she thought.Naruto then snapped back into reality and smiled, the love of his life was their hugging him. His smile quickly vanished when he noticed she was crying. He then hugged her back."Whats wrong Hina-chan? Please don't cry"Noticing that Naruto was hugging her, she blushed and stepped back, breaking the hug."…..what did you just call me?!""Hina-chan….I just thought of it" Naruto smiled"…it…it worked…." she smiled 'his paying attention to me….,he loves me, HE LOVES ME'she thought happily, forgetting what she just did to his mind."What worked?""oh….nothing,""So…want to go get some ramen Hina-chan?""sure…" she smiled happily. The guilt of modifying her crush's mind has completely left.At Konoha:Sakura was looking for Naruto everywhere, when she finally saw him walking towards Ichiraku Ramen. Smiling, she ran towards him."Hey Naruto" she said failing to see the girl hugging Naruto's left arm."Hi Sakura, so how was Tsunade-baa-chan's training yesterday""It was great, she left me alone in the Hokage's library, and I took a peek into one of the scrolls their, and learned a very, very powerful jutsu. Want to see?""Sorry Sakura, me and Hina-chan are spending the day together"'what….hina-chan?' she thought, she then noticed the girl clinging to Naruto's arm."…what….what did you just call her?…and since when did you two…"Hinata hugged Naruto's arm a little tighter, Naruto noticed this and looked at her, then back at Sakura."Sorry Sakura, but you know, places to go, so little time" Naruto smiled and he and Hinata started walking to the Ichiraku."What the heck was that all about…"Shikamaru was lying on the grass, looking at the clouds. He was lying at that spot since sunrise. He decided to finally get up to get something to eat when he saw Naruto and Hinata together. He was about to yell at Naruto to ask him whats going on, when he saw Sakura not far behind the two. To top it off, Ino was headed towards him."troublesome" he sighed and lied down again."Hey Shikamaru, are you going to look at clouds all day?!" Ino yelled"Hey, I tried to get up once, and you know what I saw? I saw Naruto with Hinata walking towards Ichiraku…"Shikamaru just realized his mistake, telling Naruto and Hinata were together to Ino was like using the "pull leaver incase Hinata and Naruto are together." Knowing Ino, it will only be a few more minutes before everyone in Konoha will know, even Hiashi…In an instant Ino was gone. Leaving Shikamaru alone again."oops…sorry Naruto, I should probably stop her….nah" Shikamaru then went back to watching clouds.On top of the Hokage monument:Naruto and Hinata were together watching the beautiful sunset."Today was a wonderful day Hina-chan, we should do this more often"'yes…today…' Hinata remembered her promise to herself, she was only going to keep Naruto like this for one day, and change his mind back. She sighed knowing that today would never happen again."Naruto…can I ask you a question?""Sure Hina-chan, whats in your mind?""Umm…If what your feeling for me now was just caused by some jutsu I used on you….how would you feel?"Naruto laughed at what she said and smiled, "we
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