I knew your magazine from the coffee shop, the format of the magazine is interesting, it made me want to read it.
First, I thought this is general magazine but when I reading it I made have many thought to learn and it made me start to keep track of your magazine.
Your magazine made me become who knew about fashion, and I loved to improve my English skills because your magazine is bilingual book. In addition, your magazine made me loved to dress up and still made me interested to learn more English. Because if I knew more languages such as English, it will made I could learn a variety of fashion from around the world.
I thought if I could use English well, I have the opportunity to work more,and I thought my English skills will make you appreciate. I saw your advertisement on cheeze magazine wedsite for the position of proofread.
There are a lot of position for proofread. I think that my qualifications will fulfil your requirements.
I like the idea that you write in the magazine. This is what makes me keep track of your work,because you did not taught me to love fashion but you taught me loved to development myself.