There is a problem with your dates. The front page has date of loss as 27 March 2014 but the text of report has 23 March 2014. Also you say the warehouse was inspected in September 2014 but you dont say what happened on that day. I assume that was before the loss not after the loss so maybe th eloss was in 2015, but was it 23 or 27 March? And you show that dates of instruction and inspection as June 2014, do you mean 2015?
Also, are there any photos of the rice and warehouse roof? If not, you need to explain in the report why not.
I have left the report in CHECKING for you to clarify these points. Thank you.