Thank you very much for sharing revise proposal and I have minor comments
1. Summary project analysis (number 1), please analysis base on project goal, objectives, expected result and methodology of strategic activities lead to change within short and concise (see comment in proposal attached)
2. I have created 5 year work plan template for an idea what is happening each year, timeline, and estimated budget (see attached file)
3. Enclosed in proposal for 2016 workplan and activity but however still need detail of target geographic and baseline of beneficiaries
4. Please share estimate 5 year budgeting and activities budget detail for 2016
5. Baseline information on situation of GBV in Chiang Khong, if available