As having a quick look, there are some comments krab;
1) Please separate schedule of architecture work and M&E work into each zone (i.e. workshop, warehouse, office).
2) Please separate the plan of interface work (i.e. fiber cable, power cable, waste piping, water piping, fire alarm connection).
3) Please submit manpower plan for each activity.
4) Please also submit procurement plan krab. Thank you krab.