the second line no stylus perfect grammar would be it has no stylus all even longer does not have a stylus we only need the message bang no stein’s and then the third line far more accurate correct sentence would be it is far more accurate than other methods its way too long far more accurate poll the audience needs edit your texts to the smallest amount possible it looks so much more powerful and allows the audience to hear to focus on and to understand key messages good on Steve Jobs used to smile all the time during his keynote speeches when you send out the smile it comes back to you of course be physically engage with your audience you will also engage them mentally