I am afraid that many of the changes were missed or done incorrectly.
The text changes made to the executive summary and acknowledgements were done very poorly, some text that was meant to be deleted was left in, spelling mistakes and spacing issues, other text was not replaced at all – many many errors. Not good, and now much worse than the original.
I have attached the Exec Summary and Acknowledgements word file again. For the highlighted yellow sections please ask the design team to COPY and PASTE the text in and then format appropriately. That way there should be no mistakes (compared to someone typing the text). Please ensure this is done carefully as this is very important part of the document.
Some other design requests were missed or not done properly:
Spacing:
1) For ALL headings levels 2, 3, 4 please ensure the space before the heading is MORE than the space AFTER the heading – it should not be the SAME space amount which it is throughout the document. Including in Boxes where there are headings/subheadings.
2) There is still too much space in-between Source & Notes underneath diagrams and at bottom of tables - a small space only please
Notes: CO2 = carbon dioxide
TOO
MUCH
SPACE HERE
Source: UNCCD
Bullet points:
1) In some boxes, bullet points are tiny and in other boxes big. Please ensure that they are the same size, big, but not as big as the bullets in main text (cause main text is bigger than box text).
2) For bullet groups in text and boxes, a SMALL space is needed between bullet point lines if any of the sentences in the group are longer than than one line..., The only bullet point groups that do not need spacing are on pages 31 and 64 I think. This enables the bullet points to be read much more clearly.
Partner logos on the back
They are still way too small, should all be similar size to the CEP logo – do not need to put them on one line in a row – distribute them evenly in the bottom quarter of the back page. WWF would be very angry with a micro logo!
Try three rows of two logos each below the picture on back cover.
Also, the CEP logo on cover is missing its text.