The job of commentary is to show how your CD proves your topic sentence
• One example of Odysseus being brave is when he goes to rescue his men, who have been turned into pigs, from the Goddess Circe
This shows that Odysseus could have just left them
behind, but he would have felt guilty and plus Odysseus likes to play the hero. Odysseus was probably afraid, but he knew
it was his fault his men where turned into pigs so it was his job
to save them.