1. Please check that all the footers read 'Gender Manual' -some still say 'Gender Mainstreaming Manual' (pages 8, 20, 44, 46, 48)
2. please capitalise the 'P' in Practices on third and fourth pages.
3. please remove the inverted commas on the titles on pages 21-26 - Abortion, Work, Domestic Violence etc
4. page 38: The first two paragraphs (Achievements within the secretariat, and challenges within the secretariat) need to be separated from the second two (achievements within the programmes, and challenges within the programmes). I'm not sure if highlighting in red works... Perhaps we could try drawing a text box around both groups i.e. secretariat & programme. OR, using a background behind one or both. The text should be in black. However, The 'Lessons Learnt and Recommendations' sections on pages 39 and 41 are good in red. but perhaps we could make them bold, to give them extra emphasis? or draw a text box around?
1. Please check that all the footers read 'Gender Manual' -some still say 'Gender Mainstreaming Manual' (pages 8, 20, 44, 46, 48)
2. please capitalise the 'P' in Practices on third and fourth pages.
3. please remove the inverted commas on the titles on pages 21-26 - Abortion, Work, Domestic Violence etc
4. page 38: The first two paragraphs (Achievements within the secretariat, and challenges within the secretariat) need to be separated from the second two (achievements within the programmes, and challenges within the programmes). I'm not sure if highlighting in red works... Perhaps we could try drawing a text box around both groups i.e. secretariat & programme. OR, using a background behind one or both. The text should be in black. However, The 'Lessons Learnt and Recommendations' sections on pages 39 and 41 are good in red. but perhaps we could make them bold, to give them extra emphasis? or draw a text box around?
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