Depending on what your story is and where you're going with it, each of these edits might work. The first gets to the root of why Sanders did it, at least in Charlie's opinion-arrogance. The second explores a more sympathetic reason behind the crime. And the third paints a picture and gives some specific information about sanders and his job. If you already have Sander's wife describing him staying up late at night panicked by bills, You might not want to use version #2. If in fact he was not at all arrogant, just blindly panicked,you might not use #1. And if you find out that he drove a used BMW, you can't use #3 because it's not accurate. Your talking heads must be fact checked, and errors can't be left in simply because you, that a significant exception is when the the falsehood is part of the story,as