Hi Mee,
Overall the retouch looks much better now. General lighting, ground and wall surfaces look good. People look much better too.
Here's consolidated comments from Mark and me.
• Desaturate slightly the background, buildings and fireworks, so they appear more natural. Too strong colors, right now.
• Raise the wall on the edge of the rooftop higher, as indicated in the PDF.
• Distort the skyscraper on the far right side so it's perspective comes closer to the perspectives of the other buildings. See the attached PDF as a rough example.
• The car on the back is too small and looks like the people wouldn't fit in. Make the car bigger, both cars bigger or, in case nothing else works, the people slightly smaller.
See which way looks more natural.
• Both cars are a bit too sharp and CGI looking. Give them a little bit of blur and add a layer of noise so they appear more like a photography and blend in with the background more naturally.
This is all fior now.
Thank you.
Christo
Hi Mee,
Overall the retouch looks much better now. General lighting, ground and wall surfaces look good. People look much better too.
Here's consolidated comments from Mark and me.
• Desaturate slightly the background, buildings and fireworks, so they appear more natural. Too strong colors, right now.
• Raise the wall on the edge of the rooftop higher, as indicated in the PDF.
• Distort the skyscraper on the far right side so it's perspective comes closer to the perspectives of the other buildings. See the attached PDF as a rough example.
• The car on the back is too small and looks like the people wouldn't fit in. Make the car bigger, both cars bigger or, in case nothing else works, the people slightly smaller.
See which way looks more natural.
• Both cars are a bit too sharp and CGI looking. Give them a little bit of blur and add a layer of noise so they appear more like a photography and blend in with the background more naturally.
This is all fior now.
Thank you.
Christo
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