14B - Planning Outline
1. Topic sentence - trip was enjoyable.
a. Preparations
(1) Mother - food, books, needlework
(2) Father - car
(3) Boys - fishing poles, toys, books
b. Reach destination
(1) Purchase bait
c. Finding fishing spot
(1) Finding first place
(2) Moving to second place
d. Real fishing began
(1) Brother caught fish
(2) Father busy
(a) His pole
(b) Helping boys cast
(c) Helping keep hooks baited
(d) Helping reel in catch
(3) Jeff caught fish
(4) Caught seven fish
(5) Cleaned fish before leaving
e. Jeff and brother were excited to catch fish
f. Father enjoyed time with sons
g. Mother enjoyed quiet time
2. Concluding sentence - It was fun for all