Your first task in writing a descriptive essay is to choose a topic that has many interesting parts or qualities to talk about. Unless you have a really vivid imagination, you'll find it difficult to write much about a simple object like a comb, for example. It's best to compare a few topics first to make sure they'll work.
The next challenge is to figure out the best way to describe your chosen subject in such a way as to relay a complete experience to the reader, so that he or she is able to see, hear, and feel through your words.
As in any writing, the drafting stage is key to writing a successful descriptive essay. Since the purpose of the essay is to paint a mental image of a specific subject, it helps to make a list of all the things you associate with your topic.
For example, if your subject is the farm where you visited your grandparents as a child you would list all the things you associate with that place. Your list should include both general attributes associated with a farm and the more personal and specific things that make it special to you and the reader.
Start with general details
Cornfields
Pigs
Cows
Garden
Farm house
Well
Then add the unique details:
That spot by the pig barn where you fell in the manure
Playing hide and seek in the cornfields
Picking wild greens for dinner with your grandmother
The stray dogs that always wandered onto the farm
Scary coyotes howling in the night
By tying these details together you can make the essay more relatable to the reader. Making these lists will allow you to see how you can tie things from each list together.
At this stage, you should determine a good order for the objects you'll describe. For example, if you are describing an object, you should determine whether you want to describe its appearance from top to bottom, or side to side.
Remember that it is important to begin your essay on a general level and work your way down to specifics. Start by outlining a simple five-paragraph essay with three main topics. Then you may expand on this basic outline.
Next you will begin to construct a thesis statement and a trial topic sentence for each main paragraph.
The thesis sentence should convey your overall impression of your subject. Does it make you happy? Is it attractive or ugly? Is your object useful?
Each topic sentence should introduce a new part or stage of your choses topic.
Don't worry, you can change these sentences later. It's time to start writing paragraphs!
As you build your paragraphs, you should avoid confusing the reader by bombarding them with unfamiliar information immediately; you must ease your way into your topic in your introductory paragraph. For example, instead of saying,
The farm was where I spent most summers holidays. During the summer we played hide and seek in the cornfields and walked through the cow pastures to pick wild greens for supper. Nana always carried a gun for snakes.
Instead, give the reader a broad view of your subject and work your way into the details. A better example would be:
In a small rural town in central Ohio was a farm surrounded by miles of cornfields. In this place, on many warm summer days, my cousins and I would run through the cornfields playing hide and seek or making our own crop circles as clubhouses. My grandparents, whom I called Nana and Papa, lived on this farm for many years. The old farmhouse was large and always full of people, and it was surrounded by wild animals. I spent many of my childhood summers and holidays here. It was the family gathering place.
Another simple rule of thumb to remember is "show don't tell." If you want to describe a feeling or action you should reinvent it through the senses rather than just state it. For example, instead of:
I got excited every time we pulled into the driveway of my grandparents house.
Try to elaborate what was really going on in your head:
After sitting for several hours in the back seat of the car, I found the slow crawl up the driveway to be absolute torture. I just knew Nana was inside waiting with fresh baked pies and treats for me. Papa would have some toy or trinket hidden somewhere but he would pretend not to recognize me for a few minutes just to tease me before he gave it to me. As my parents would struggle to pry the suitcases out of the trunk, I would bounce all the way up the porch and rattle the door until someone finally let me in.
The second version paints a picture and puts the reader in the scene. Anyone can be excited. What your reader needs and wants to know is, what makes it exciting?
Finally, don't try to cram too much into one paragraph. Use each paragraph to describe a different aspect of your subject. Check to make sure that your essay flows from one paragraph to the next with good transition statements.
The conclusion of your paragraph is where you can tie everything together and restate the thesis of your essay. Take all the details and summarize what they mean to you and why it is important.
งานแรกของคุณในการเขียนเรียงความอธิบายคือการ เลือกหัวข้อที่มีมากมายน่าสนใจอะไหล่หรือคุณภาพเพื่อพูดคุยเกี่ยวกับ เว้นแต่คุณมีจินตนาการที่สดใสจริง ๆ คุณจะพบมันยากที่จะเขียนมากเกี่ยวกับวัตถุอย่างเช่นหวี ตัวอย่าง ควรเปรียบเทียบกี่หัวข้อแรกให้แน่ใจว่าพวกเขาจะทำงานได้ความท้าทายต่อไปจะคิดออกวิธีที่ดีสุดเพื่ออธิบายเรื่องของท่านในลักษณะเป็นการถ่ายทอดข้อมูลประสบการณ์ที่สมบูรณ์เพื่ออ่าน เพื่อให้เขาหรือเธอมองเห็น ได้ยิน และความรู้สึกผ่านคำของคุณในการเขียน ขั้นร่างเป็นกุญแจสำคัญในการเขียนเรียงความอธิบายประสบความสำเร็จ เนื่องจากวัตถุประสงค์ของการเรียงความการ วาดภาพของเรื่อง จะช่วยให้รายการของกิจกรรมทั้งหมดที่คุณเชื่อมโยงกับหัวข้อของคุณตัวอย่าง ถ้าเรื่องของคุณเป็นฟาร์มที่คุณเยี่ยมชมของคุณปู่ย่าตายายเป็นเด็ก คุณจะแสดงรายการสิ่งทั้งหมดที่คุณเชื่อมโยงกับสถานที่ รายการของคุณควรรวมทั้งคุณลักษณะทั่วไปที่เกี่ยวข้องกับฟาร์มและส่วนบุคคลมากขึ้น และบางสิ่งที่ทำให้มันพิเศษกับคุณผู้อ่านเริ่มต้น ด้วยรายละเอียดทั่วไป Cornfields สุกร วัว การ์เด้น ฟาร์มเฮ้าส์ ดีเพิ่มรายละเอียดเฉพาะ: ที่พักตามที่คุณตกมูลที่ยุ้งข้าวหมู เล่นซ่อน และแสวงหาใน cornfields เบิกป่าผักสำหรับอาหารมื้อเย็นกับคุณยาย ในไตรโลกพริกถึงขิงที่เสมอตัวที่เดินเข้าไปในฟาร์ม หมาป่าน่ากลัวเห่าหอนในเวลากลางคืนBy tying these details together you can make the essay more relatable to the reader. Making these lists will allow you to see how you can tie things from each list together.At this stage, you should determine a good order for the objects you'll describe. For example, if you are describing an object, you should determine whether you want to describe its appearance from top to bottom, or side to side.Remember that it is important to begin your essay on a general level and work your way down to specifics. Start by outlining a simple five-paragraph essay with three main topics. Then you may expand on this basic outline.Next you will begin to construct a thesis statement and a trial topic sentence for each main paragraph. The thesis sentence should convey your overall impression of your subject. Does it make you happy? Is it attractive or ugly? Is your object useful? Each topic sentence should introduce a new part or stage of your choses topic.Don't worry, you can change these sentences later. It's time to start writing paragraphs!As you build your paragraphs, you should avoid confusing the reader by bombarding them with unfamiliar information immediately; you must ease your way into your topic in your introductory paragraph. For example, instead of saying,The farm was where I spent most summers holidays. During the summer we played hide and seek in the cornfields and walked through the cow pastures to pick wild greens for supper. Nana always carried a gun for snakes.Instead, give the reader a broad view of your subject and work your way into the details. A better example would be:In a small rural town in central Ohio was a farm surrounded by miles of cornfields. In this place, on many warm summer days, my cousins and I would run through the cornfields playing hide and seek or making our own crop circles as clubhouses. My grandparents, whom I called Nana and Papa, lived on this farm for many years. The old farmhouse was large and always full of people, and it was surrounded by wild animals. I spent many of my childhood summers and holidays here. It was the family gathering place.Another simple rule of thumb to remember is "show don't tell." If you want to describe a feeling or action you should reinvent it through the senses rather than just state it. For example, instead of:I got excited every time we pulled into the driveway of my grandparents house.Try to elaborate what was really going on in your head:After sitting for several hours in the back seat of the car, I found the slow crawl up the driveway to be absolute torture. I just knew Nana was inside waiting with fresh baked pies and treats for me. Papa would have some toy or trinket hidden somewhere but he would pretend not to recognize me for a few minutes just to tease me before he gave it to me. As my parents would struggle to pry the suitcases out of the trunk, I would bounce all the way up the porch and rattle the door until someone finally let me in.เวอร์ชันสองวาดรูป และทำให้ผู้อ่านในฉาก ทุกคนได้ตื่นเต้น อะไรของคุณผู้อ่านต้องการ และอยากรู้คือ สิ่งที่ทำให้ตื่นเต้นในที่สุด ไม่ได้เร่งมากเกินไปในหนึ่งย่อหน้า ใช้แต่ละย่อหน้าเพื่ออธิบายลักษณะต่าง ๆ ของหัวข้อเรื่อง ตรวจสอบให้แน่ใจว่า เรียงความของคุณไหลจากย่อหน้าหนึ่งไปกับงบเปลี่ยนดีสรุปของย่อหน้าของคุณคือ ที่คุณสามารถผูกทุกอย่างเข้าด้วยกัน และ restate วิทยานิพนธ์ของเรียงของคุณ นำรายละเอียดทั้งหมด และสรุปสิ่งที่พวกเขาหมายถึงคุณและทำไมจึงสำคัญ
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