I can not really judge without having the whole elementthe text in white on pink is not readable at distance, you must be near to see it. Remember that you don't have 1 second to catch the attention.Kay do not understand the last word, words' game for Ladyboys?nobody knows LB-Care and the products, so how to push them to buy it with this wording? We need to be clear, short, showing the products and the advantages of the products in short wording like "LB-Care, intimate-care products designed for ladyboys! Available here!" Remember that you are not Dior or L'Oreal. Nobody knows you and will come to you to know more just because it looks nicePictures of the products are a need, a must with a clear short descritionI cannot judge the image. Does it speak to a ladyboy? Why a clear view on the underwear? Do we sell swimming suites? Should the tissu not recover a nude bottom with a nude back (not seen as it is covered by the tissu) so we know what for it is!Try to put the B of the logo a bit darker and try to use this color to accentuate some wordsdon't believe that people will interpret what you think. Tell them directly! There are a very few intellectual people in the world...
I can not really judge without having the whole elementthe text in white on pink is not readable at distance, you must be near to see it. Remember that you don't have 1 second to catch the attention.Kay do not understand the last word, words' game for Ladyboys?nobody knows LB-Care and the products, so how to push them to buy it with this wording? We need to be clear, short, showing the products and the advantages of the products in short wording like "LB-Care, intimate-care products designed for ladyboys! Available here!" Remember that you are not Dior or L'Oreal. Nobody knows you and will come to you to know more just because it looks nicePictures of the products are a need, a must with a clear short descritionI cannot judge the image. Does it speak to a ladyboy? Why a clear view on the underwear? Do we sell swimming suites? Should the tissu not recover a nude bottom with a nude back (not seen as it is covered by the tissu) so we know what for it is!Try to put the B of the logo a bit darker and try to use this color to accentuate some wordsdon't believe that people will interpret what you think. Tell them directly! There are a very few intellectual people in the world...
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