I [will] also will provide them some necessary skills as well as basic information that helps them have a stable foundation to become a good civil [citizen] in the future. What is more, when becoming a teacher I also have a chance to meet and talk with students in order to [better] understand more their feeling[s ] and their conditions, {"conditions" is a bit unclear to me} particularly the students who live in remote and mountainous areas{comma} to help them overcome their difficulties and have a good outcome in their study process.
In a word, each job has its own feature[s ], teaching that has many benefits not only for me but also for whole society as I just told above that is reason why I choose it is my job in the future. {this conclusion is pretty bad. It is confusing and sounds like it is all running together.}