Ploy,
What you did was nice.
Please take out the bottles and the words, new design.
Please try two:
On the logo, use the natural goodness that is on the bottom of all of the new logos, and on the top use happiness inside and omit the other happiness inside.
Perhaps Tiffany has some other words for the circle.
Or
Just use the banner without the circle and keep the happiness inside on the top
Thank you, Jenny