· Figure 7, page 15: Two problems here. First, name of countries shifted, the correct figure is in the attached file (figure 7.xlsx). Second, please change the color to the same color as figure’s title. This light blue does not look good.
· Figure 8 and 9: Names of cities is not well seen on these figures. Increase the font size. Data and figures 8 and 9 are also in the attached file.
· Revise the selected sub-titles in Chapter 4 (my mistake, I overlooked this earlier!), the new titles are the following:
o 4.2. High seasonality of paddy production in Myanmar (page 16)
o 4.3. Weak domestic market integration (page 19)
o 4.5. Uncertainty over private rice stocks (page 23)
· Paras 87 and 88, page 30: check their format, they need to have the same format as other paras, tab 0.5
· Table 21, page 37: last sentences in the middle column (recommendations) in the last three boxes look like they are not well linked to the rest of the paragraph