Dear khun Nuntikan Nirapanna.
Hello! Khun Nuntikan Nirapanna . It’s nice to meet you.
My name is Pranatda Rithipon. I’m writing to let you know that in your letter good and missing a littel point important. You could add some more detail to your letter.
1. The first thing I observed was that you did the form in your letter is very good.
2. Subject of the letter you have to written 'Dear Host family'.
3. Introduce yourself to your very good and your family is good.
4. You can communicate with your host family very good about things your hobby and what your favorite.
5. I understand everything in your letter, but I don’t think all the spelling is correct.
6. The paragraph in the letter should be beautiful like form letter.
7. In your letter you have the goal for the future after graduating from this cultural exchange program good.
8. 'Yours sincerely' this should be the end sentences.
9. Your letter it’s easy to understand.
10. Most of Your English and your letter is very good.
If you have any questions, please feel free to let me know.
Best regards
Pranatda Rithipon
368/26 Sai mai Road Bangkok 10220
Tel : 089-799 4960
Email : Pranatda11@yahoo.co.th