There were quite a number of photographs of the environment, which is fine in order to put the geography of the area in context, but do they fundamentally help to develop the argument?
What difference will the new designs make to the community?
Should the literature review include other architects?
The issue over the sizes and styles of the mats was explained well as was the positioning and colours used, representing those used in ceremonies etc.
What difference do you think the new designs will make?
What would you have done differently if you could start again?
Have you answered your three objectives?