“The Death Car” just this name can make reader to be fearful, and wonder what
about death car. Narrator wants this emotion that mentions above line conveyed to reader,
especially setting of the story which gives reader various feeling. So, I am going to criticize
the story. Reader knows that a couple are on the country side because in the text tells me that
they drove through the empty country roads. When the car looks to have a problem, narrator
describe that situation by using metaphor that is “the engine only coughed” and “the engine
died completely”. Those sentences express the car’s engine is stopping, and finally it really
stop. And whole atmosphere begins more horror as well.