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a 98-pound weakling that doesn’t get enough vitamins. In other words, it can’t join Dear Alissa,
Your smile, with its capped teeth and strikingly attractive knotty pine
denture. I can think of nothing I would rather do than contemplate the gap
between your molars. Inspired by your eyebrows, I think of stars,
constellations, and furry little bears. In the future, when I will have the
time to write poetry about those brows. Your nose alone merits a
poem, a sonnet should be dedicated to its nostrils. A wrestler would be
proud to have a neck such as yours. Your shoulders slope invitingly,
moreover, your hips swivel better than my office chair. Across those
noble shoulders slides your hair, as thick as extra-strength glue. How can
I forget your eyes I am yours forever, Alissa, unless I get distracted by a
better offer.
Your friend,
Greg