Nong,
I sent the report last night. However, there might have some issue with e-mail. Anyway, below is my recommendation.
Good job. Anyway, I have some commend below. Pls complete this and put in the weekly report this week and revert back to me by the end of today.
1) PIC should add system owner as well.
2) Do the read proof. I see many words incorrect spelling.
3) What is the definition of color code?
4) There is no item# after item#7 onward.
Item#2: what the reading level at the scene?
Item#3: did PM scope cover the rusty or rusty equipment impact the performance of the pump?
Item#4: what is the latest PM?
Item#9: is finding located att B2 or B4 or both? What is the last PM and did they find this issue?
Item#10: what the PM report said and how much (cannot see from photo) and the report should give the detail.