Martin entered a contest to win a hot air balloon ride, and he won! He was so excited. He went with his best friend, and they were very glad that Martin won. After that we are going to celebrate at Martin's House. At Martin's house everybody congratulate him. Today is a day that everyone is happy. The celebration began, when everyone come house. Friends and family of Martin eat dinner and have fun. It was a good day. A day of Martin.
Topic Sentence: Martin entered a contest to win a hot air balloon ride, and he won
A. excited
1. He's excited to get this award.
2. He was excited to go on a balloon.
B. went with his best friend
1. He went up on the balloon with his friends.
2. He wanted to go up with his friends.
Concluding Sentence: He's excited and happy to have good friends and family.
-Martin is excited to be on the balloon, and happy. Participation in the race this time.
-Because of the high balloon was made to feel afraid.
-View from the top people at the bottom can't be seen.
-Because it is what he loves.