Fishbone- plese use explanation- that is more on the lcassroom level- Good t see that the problem is also connected with the Ministry but I suggest to focus more on situation that you can handle and will be solved by the action research
Use only research question 1-4.
shorten statement of the problem to 1-2 sentences
Definition of terms - include readers threater, prosody and all other terms related to your study
significance of the study- include significance for sudents, for engloish program and for you as researcher and teacher
design of your study - I suggest no control and independent group since this is not an experimental study but action research., Just use both classes for your IDI .