Revising
After completing your draft, read it again carefully to find ways to make your
writing better. Here are some of the things you should look for.
Revise to strengthen your thesis
x Do the introduction and thesis statements create a clear, unified
impression of the person about whom you are writing?
x Do the body paragraphs develop this impression?
Revise to meet written English-language conventions
x Are all sentences complete, with a subject and a verb?
x Are all the words spelled correctly?
x Are all proper nouns capitalized, including names of people and places?
x Did you use proper punctuation?