Title: An unforgettable moment in life
Topic sentence: an unforgettable moment in life is going to the beach for the first time.
Major Detail Sentence 1: Firstly, I am very excited to experience the sea for the first time in my life.
Minor Detail A: The sand of the sea filled with shells and sand white beautiful.
Minor Detail B: The water has crystal clear, until I can see the fish.
Major Detail Sentence 2: Secondly, diving in the sea
Minor Detail A: Get experience in diving from the navy
Minor Detail B: I also go coral diving.
Major Detail Sentence 3: Finally, Experience in the boat ride for the first time.
Minor Detail A: Take a boat trip island and relaxing on the boat.
Minor Detail B: Take a bost for fishing.