I enjoyed the read. The first sentence grabbed my attention, was well written, at first I thought it was a baby. Then, to your interesting details, I figured it must have been a mentaly disabled man, but again, I felt a sincerity in believing it was a baby. The alchohol threw me off. Was it just a substitute to prove men sometimes act like babies, because it could have stood for the milk the babie's crave?
overall, fantastic, creative, a bit hard to comprehend, discisive, good!