Please ignore last draft.
I have now looked at the first 10 pages of Jariya's latest version of
chapter 2 of over 100 pages..
I am not happy with this. I have made a number of suggestions to her,
all of which she has ignored!
She also has a lot of material , which in my view , should be in her
analytical chapter.
There may also be plagiarism involved..
I will not look at any more of her work until she makes the required changes.
Brian