The test taker has organized the text in a logical and well-balanced way.
There are 5 paragraphs, including the introductory paragraph and a summary
conclusion. The test taker produces clear topic sentences followed by appropriate
supporting information. For example, in paragraph 2, s/he begins, “What I am doing
is to promote gender equality in Thai society”. S/he goes on to give examples of
how s/he does that. The test taker also uses a number of cohesive devices including
for example, because, and, but, and then though not always correctly. However,
the signposts in paragraph 3, “After the project [is formulated] I have to discuss
with colleagues in [different] divisions.