I think this story is so interesting because ‘the death car’ is one of urban legend that's suitably thrilling. It has sequence the situation is well and told to detail of situation to clearly so the readers feel like in those situations. The prominence point of this story is rhythm of the narrative of the events in a story, it fits perfectly. It can make the reader to flow with story. I have to appreciate about language in this writing because the author use the word that very easy to understand as the reader was in situation.