I think this spouse have something is unbelievable such as when her husband have to walk from the car in raining, but his wife would not to go because it’s raining. His husband did not care and go outside in raining. This is not reasonability because in the real life, spouse should take care of together in this satiation her husband were her side all the time. This situation is so dangerous the spouse should right by side and protect together. In case, her husband did not care of her and go in raining alone.
I have to appreciate about language in this writing because the author use the word that very easy to understand as the reader was in situation. (ใช้คำกระชับ เข้าใจง่ายจินตนาการตามได้)
For reasonability have some of story is unbelievable such as when her husband came back to the car and then knock three times like the spouse’s arrangement before he went from the car, but his wife did not care anything. In the real life, when you heard something you must care and have to know what sound is it? This point is fault in the writing that made me wonder, why his wife did not care the knock sound.
The literary text about murder so the reader will read story about scary, horror and excited in this writing because when I read the story that made me scare, excited and believe step by step in each word. I imaged in my and wonder about a many question that what about murder; where is he? The murder will kill someone again, isn’t it? How to kill? The author described for the reader to understand easily so I am able to understand and believe in the situation as I was there in my image. However, story have something is fault about reasonability about the spouse, it is not reasonability. This point made this writing is not perfect enough. The author is able to make me believe that I were there in the story such as in line told that wife heard something, it’s loud sound that “blump, blump, blump, blump” it’s so loud in my mind while I were reading this line the language in story is great in my opinion