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Over the last twenty years, there has been much controversy as to whether it is better to livE in the countryside or in the city. Many argue that living in the countryside is by far the best option, while others claim that living in the city has more pros than cons. In this essay, I will analyze the pros and cons in order to come to a conclusion.
Undoubtedly, living in the city MAKES THINGS LIKE COMMUTING OR TAKING YOUR KIDS TO SCHOOL VERY EASY AND CONVENIENT. It's a well known fact that living in the city offers you the possibility of moving AROUND the city using public transport. There is also the cliché that living in the city is great because you have everything close to your house, for instance, shops and supermarkets, and there is a grain of truth to it.
However, when analyzed in more detail, living in the city can also be a great source of pollution and noise. If we look closer, we will realize that living in the city isn't actually all it is cracked up to be. We shouldn't forget either that living in the city could very easily lead to personal health problems.
Besides, living in the countryside offers you a far wider range of possibilities when it comes to relaxING or IMPROVING YOUR health. Take for instance PEACE AND QUIET. Experience shows that living in the countryside will let you sleep and eat better. Another major advantage is that if you should need to LOOK AFTER your health, all your needs would be met.
To sum up, even though living in the city has some advantages like usING public transport or EASY ACCESS TO MANY SERVICES, the fact that living in the countryside allows you relax and BE healthY, makes it quite clear that living in the countryside constitutes the best option by far.