1. Introduction Paragraph
In my opinion, travel is interesting activity that allows people to have new vision and gain healthy benefits.
2. Body Paragraph I
Topic Sentence I : People can have new vision.
2.1 Experience the different cultures e.g. new places and new people.
2.2 Business opportunity e.g. new market survey and new business plan in local area.
3. Body Paragraph II
Topic Sentence II : Travel is to gain healthy benefits.
3.1 Better mental health e.g. relaxing, tense release activities such as massage/spa.
3.2 Better physical health e.g. adventure or sports activities.
4. Conclusion Paragraph
There are several reasons and various kind of activities that make travelling become an interesting for many people because it have to get a new vision and gain healthy benefits.