I had a look at your document and I have to say that it is rather disappointing: at the moment is just a list of the topics that it will be covered, so it is not a draft of a chapter.
I have also to add that I am getting worried about your progress : it seems you have progressed very little since you have arrived in Lincoln and I don't see a strong commitment on your behalf.
I would urge you to send me some proper draft of your chapter (not just a list of the topics you will be covering) by the 24th June at the latest.
I will get back in touch with the date for the next meeting: please make sure that you can attend it.