- The Abstract should be better summarized.
- As for the Introduction, it would have been more pertinent to go into depth on issues strongly related to the focus of the paper.
- Generally, the manuscript contains several stylistic, grammatical, and typographical issues and would benefit from thorough editing and proofreading, with attention to the syntactic structure and lexical choice. The author writes well in general, but there are some issues with grammar and word choice, which need revision.