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Step 1: Prewrite to get ideas---free-writing
In the prewriting step, you get ideas what to write about. Taking notes is one way to gather ideas which is called free-writing. The goal is to keep writing without stopping for about ten minutes or until you run out of ideas. Here is how to do freewriting:
1. Choose a topic and write it at the top of a piece of paper.
2. Then write whatever sentences come into your mind about the topic.
3. Don’t worry about grammar,spelling,punctuation, or putting your ideas into any kind of order.
4. Don’t have to write complete sentences.
5. Write it in your own language if you can’t of English word.
=>Model Free-writing
Free-writing about my grandmother.
My grandmother. . She was a good cook. The best cook. Every weekend we have a big dinner. With big, big bowls of food. Lots of talking. Everybody in the family there. Every time we eat the same food, but we always love it. Is our favorite favorite meal. She never mad at us she always defends us when we are in trouble with our parents. One time I picked all the roses in her garden. She not even mad then. Grandmother kind and generous. She give food to poor people. She never makes them feel bad about taking it. Makes people feel good, just as she made me feel good when I picked all the roses. Thanked me for the beautiful bouquet. Mother really angry. Grandmothers always forgive forgiving heart.
After you have run out of ideas, edit your free-writing. Edit means to review and change writing in order to improve it. Cross out ideas that aren’t related to the one main idea.
Model Edited Free-writing
Free-writing about my Grandmother
My grandmother. She was a good cook. The best cook. Every weekend we have a big dinner. With big, big bowls of food. Lots of talking. Everybody in the family there. Every time we eat the same food, but we always love it. Is our favorite favorite meal. She never mad at us. She always defends us when we are in trouble with our parents. One time I picked all the roses in her garden. She not ever makes then. Grandmother kind and generous. She gives food to poor people. She never makes them feel bad about taking it. Makes people feel good, just as she made me feel good when I picked all the roses. Thanked me for the beautiful bouquet. Mother really angry. Grandmother always forgives. Forgiving heart.
Step: 2 write the first draft
In the second step, you write your paragraph in rough from without worrying is called the first draft or the rough draft.
=>Model First Draft
My grandmother
My grandmother. kind and generous. She never mad at us. She always makes people feel good. One time I picked all the roses in her garden. She not mad even then. She made me feel good. Thanked me for the beautiful bouquet. Grandmother gives food to poor people. She never makes them feel good when I picked all the roses. Grandmother always forgive. Forgiving heart.
Step 3: Edit the first draft
In the third step, you edit your paragraph. When you edit something, you check it, make changes, and corrections.
Step 4: Write the final copy
In the last step, you write a neat final copy of you paragraph. The corrections are made by:
• Crossing out unnecessary sentences
• Adding missing subjects and verbs
• Moving sentences
• changing the ending to match the beginning
=>Model Final copy
My grandmother
My grandmother is kind and generous. She always make people feel good. One time I picked me for giving her a beautiful bouquet. Grandmother also gives food to poor people. She never make them feel bad about taking it. She makes them feel good, just as she made me feel when I picked all the roses. I will always remember my grandmother’ kindness and generosity.
Check your understanding
Rewrite the following paragraph. Add capital letters and period as needed. When you are finished, your paragraph should have 9 sentences. Remember to use correct.
A love of books
My father always had a great love of books he used to carry a small book with him at all times he always found at least fifteen minutes a day to read he read the book at every opportunity he read it on the bus, at the doctor’s office, and in the supermarket he never wasted a spare minute he always found his fifteen minutes a day to read he read twenty books and one thousand book in his lifetime