Cannons are a bit on the big side, but otherwise perfect. The top part of them is probably a better fit for what I want than the bottom half. I'd appreciate the face being more like the second sketch you sent, I really liked that face.
Otherwise, Lawrence looks a little too manly, he's meant to be easily mistaken for a girl. And now seems about time to mention, he's meant to be wearing a shirt with a vest over the top of it, not just the vest. Didn't mention it sooner since there were bigger problems to resolve, but now that we're approaching the final form figured I'd bring it up.