When we think of OSEOUS, we would like the readers or the target riders to know OSEOUS best features. But in this graphic, what I can see is like a robotic gear which didn’t mean anything to me.
I would prefer to stress on
1. The ceramic brake rim on carbon light weight wheel, or
2. Alloy wheel with ceramic brake rim
3. Take the Japanese magazine as an example to do this upcoming advertisement
4. Apply my points made in the Japanese Magazine this one.
Please review & do it ASAP, send draft to me for decision shortly.
Best Regards,