To point out in this story, the main reasoning on why he should be charged with premeditated violent crimes is because his ‘fantasies’ involved a University of Michigan student’s name that he had a class with.
Because these stories are pure fiction, the young woman might not feel a direct threat from Jake to be kidnapped or tortured and etc., but the fact that Jake used her real name brings defamation to her character in the Ann Arbor community. This is where we feel like Jake went over the line with his short stories.