In the file is approved back from client. Here is feedback from client about Extra Cold copy krub.
“Thanks for sending this over, to be honest I’m struggling to find right balance to this copy as well
A few notes:
• Extra Cold
• I cut out the ones I think that are too cheesy, esp friends, can we fix the tone a bit so it’s more sophisticated
• Let’s have another category which talks about the outlet “XXX is at XXX and is a top-notch Japanese restaurant…, find Extra Cold here everyday” small trivia about the outlet
• I cut out the sports themes, these can’t be used all year
• I like the ones focused on ‘coldness’ but pls not cheesy na
Can I have a few more? If there’s more comments I will send it over, but overall good effort ka, let’s make it sound more casual”
P’Tueng please provide 5 more copy in each category at your soonest krub.