Overall, I quite like the short story because I think it look strange. On the other hand, I think the author should improve the plot of the article, because this short story is quite long and I think the content is too complicated so it's hard to understand all about this short story. In addition, I think I have to spend a lot of time in reading until I feel bored and do not want to read it. So I think the author should write a plot that is easy to understand and not too difficult for the reader because it will make the readers are interested and want to read it more.