Quite good I think. The answers were well put together, and the ideas were
logical, clear, and easy to follow. You made some good points and I agree with
most of them. I liked the way you provided evidence to support your main point.
Most of the ideas were good, but I think the last point you made needs to be
supported with better evidence. I think your essay would have been more
complete if you had added a conclusion at the end. Better proofreading was also
needed to help improve your work as there were still some careless mistakes—
spelling, grammar, and punctuation. I look forward to reading your work again.
I know that my work is how do I have a defective where he felt very glad that have been aware of the feeling that I will have to update themselves in the right direction in accordance with the principles of the language grammatical sensitivity I have learned, I hope that you have. I have a productive feats of work again.
Quite good I think. The answers were well put together, and the ideas were
logical, clear, and easy to follow. You made some good points and I agree with
most of them. I liked the way you provided evidence to support your main point.
Most of the ideas were good, but I think the last point you made needs to be
supported with better evidence. I think your essay would have been more
complete if you had added a conclusion at the end. Better proofreading was also
needed to help improve your work as there were still some careless mistakes—
spelling, grammar, and punctuation. I look forward to reading your work again.
I know that my work is how do I have a defective where he felt very glad that have been aware of the feeling that I will have to update themselves in the right direction in accordance with the principles of the language grammatical sensitivity I have learned, I hope that you have. I have a productive feats of work again.
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